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BlueSpot's avatar

Did you mean "Capitol" which is a building, or did you mean "Capital" which is the seat of government?

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Kiwiwriter47's avatar

That’s what the city is called in the book. My inference is that it’s Salt Lake City.

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BlueSpot's avatar

I didn't catch that, but it's been awhile since I last read the books. So, "Capitol" it is. : )

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Kiwiwriter47's avatar

Don’t worry about it.

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BlueSpot's avatar

That’s one aspect of writing fan fiction, you have to adhere to the rules established by the person who built the sandbox you’re playing in. I do like what I’m reading from you, what you’re incorporating from military history and other things. I’m now waiting to see if you incorporate one or more drone strikes similar to what Ukraine did against Russia earlier this week.

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Kiwiwriter47's avatar

There’s military history, there’s political history, there’s government issues, there are personal issues…you already saw my references to PTSD and “stop-loss.” There’s a lot in this book.

The big thing is…it’s about adults, not teenagers.

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